Only spotted two little things:

2nd paragraph should be gymnac not gymmac

In the paragraph after the list of figures in the notation: "...would usually have performed..."

See you later :)

On 22 February 2016 at 12:10, Katherine Richardson <katherineh.richardson@gmail.com> wrote:
Looking good, I've added some small edits/suggestions.

See you later
K

On Sun, Feb 21, 2016 at 11:44 PM, Laura Smyth <laura_marie_smyth@hotmail.com> wrote:
I need to add in the references at the end and it all needs tidying up a little - but I'm knackered and need to go to bed....

I'll probably do a little more tomorrow if I can, but if you can let me know what you think in the meantime, that would be much appreciated.

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