I think the first picture looks best, and I am on the side of removing
that last line. It doesn't look as good written down as it sounds
said out loud!
Rachel
PS. I'll also be aiming for the 19.40, though I haven't bought the tickets yet.
On Tue, Jan 15, 2013 at 2:29 PM, Nicola Cairns
<rhubarb.features(a)gmail.com> wrote:
Pedantry: perhaps 'feathered guardians' in the
plural instead.
W.r.t puns, i'm always biased on the side of bad jokes.. However we could
keep our respectability instead :P
Nikki
On 15 Jan 2013 14:24, "Ffion Dean" <ffion_coch(a)hotmail.com> wrote:
Hi everyone,
After the practice last night some of us wrote a short blurb for the DERT
programme. It goes something like this:
"Formed in the wake of DERT 2012, Tower Ravens are London's newest,
youngest, most attractive (and only) female rapper team. Named after the
feathered guardian of the crown jewels, these birds have escaped the
confines of the tower and are looking forward to sampling the delights of
Burton upon Trent. They don't like to crow too loudly but you'll soon be
raven about them!"
In the cold light of day I'm wondering whether the last sentence comes
across as witty or just a bit sad. Perhaps we want to keep the crow and
raving jokes for the Tommy routine. Anyone have opinions on this?
I think this is the best photo to send -
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10100366043358582&set=oa.4397932…
Anyone object?
Alternatively this one-
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10100366045369552&set=oa.4397932…
Nic, I think these are both your photos so could you possibly send me the
original pictures?
Thanks,
Ffion x
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