Scrap that last I've now found the break down:
Presentation – marked out of 15
Good Points
To get the maximum 15 marks, the team’s presentation must meet the following criteria:
Good entrance into dance area
Good ending and exit from dance area
Very smart, clean and tidy kit, including shoes, hair etc. I APOLOGISE ABOUT MY HAIR
All dancers wearing matching kit, including shoes
Kit is appropriate for rapper and harmonises with overall presentation, enhancing performance
Shiny clean swords
Musician(s) dressed smartly and appropriately
All performers appear confident and positive throughout dance MAYBE??
Consistent approach e.g. All smiling/enjoying dance or all serious
Bad Points
Marks will be deducted if presentation fails to meet any of the Good criteria, for instance:
Poor entrance
Poor exit
Scruffy, untidy, dirty kit e.g. 'White' shirts not white, shoes not polished, underwear visible
Kit not consistent between dancers
Kit coming adrift during dance e.g. loose sashes, dropped rosettes, shirts untucked, socks falling down
Kit that affects how people dance, for instance by restricting movement
Fidgeting at start or end of dance when should be standing still
Talking in set, if it is not part of the act
Dancers scowling, frowning, looking nervous etc. MAYBE??
Basically...apart from facial expressions for both DERT and trad I don't understand what more they want.
hmmmmm
Subject: Re: [Tower Ravens] DERT results
From: ffion_coch@hotmail.com
Date: Mon, 14 Mar 2016 19:42:37 +0000
To: rebeccasuch@hotmail.com
CC: team@towerravens.org.uk
Definitely well done Laura on the writing and everything else. I think only 10 for presentation is nonsense though. It was by far the best female kit there! I guess presentation is more than just kit though unfortunately. Really looking forward to reading the judge's comments on the trad. X
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This appeared on the Star and Shadow inner members page that I am privy to, I don't know where it came from or if it's available anywhere else so apologies if it's a dull repeat!
What I don't think we've seen is the trad individual marks. Looking at these I think we all need to give Laura a huge well done, we got extra points for the effort she put into the written element and ensuring we then performed it as closely to that notation as possible.
WELL DONE :)
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