Hey Ffion and other Ravens,
Watched this again, and it seems much more impressive after a day or two! Looks like it's getting pretty slick. We mentioned a couple of things that we needed to improve after we watched it on Monday, those being:
Fourth corner - swords being straight
Stand in guard - remember that it is happening
But after watching this again, I was also thinking that Back Ache was looking a little messy. It looks as if we're all just piling round as quickly as we can. And whilst I think speed is good, I think that timing is better. Is there a way that we can time it so that each person does a sharp turn on each or every other beat? Is that what we are meant to be doing anyway???
That's all my feedback!
Laura
> From: ffion_coch@hotmail.com
> Date: Tue, 25 Feb 2014 22:59:18 +0000
> To: team@towerravens.org.uk
> Subject: [Tower Ravens] Guess what, another video!
>
> Here's the last dance from Monday
> http://youtu.be/PanicNp0yZ4
>
> Ffion x
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